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skemcin

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 1284 Location: Plainfield, IL
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2005 11:26 pm Post subject: 924 Haiku |
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I figured after a few recent posts that have been way off topic, I figured I'd try to bring us back to who we are. I feel one of the best was to do this is by expressing ourselves through poetry - I prefer Haiku (reminds me of high school).
Reminder: Haiku Poetry is one of the most important form of traditional japanese poetry. It is creasted by writing a 17 syllable poem broken up into three lines the first and last with 5 syllables and the middle line with 7. Strictly speaking, the first and third line should have nothing to dowith each other, but teh middle (7 syllable line) ties them together.
Bad Example:
My silver Porsche
A nineteen seventy-nine
Love my nine two four
Good Example:
Love my nine two four
Born in late seventy-nine
Kristanna Loken
Have Fun! _________________ 924.org (no time to complete)
9249206346 - 89k – new shifter bushings, belts, running well.
9249206347 - 8k – waiting its resurrection, no power at the fuel pump and fuse #7 blows w/power |
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leadfoot

Joined: 11 Dec 2002 Posts: 2222 Location: gOLD cOAST Australia
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 12:19 am Post subject: |
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supercharge my car
love to hear the sound it makes
go the 9 2 4
Leadfoot _________________ 1981 ROW 924 Turbo -
carbon fiber GT mish mash
LS1 conversion in progress... |
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Vince Ponz

Joined: 02 Nov 2002 Posts: 3581 Location: Florida
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 12:23 am Post subject: |
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Go back to sleep
I will not wake
You big creep
nah just kidding _________________ "Never let them see you sweat"
77.5 924 modified track car
79 931 Euro stock
88 924S SE
87 911 Targa stock |
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D Hook

Joined: 02 Nov 2002 Posts: 3158 Location: Omaha, NE
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 9:48 am Post subject: |
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There once was a Porsche from Nantucket......
oops. Sorry, wrong forum!  _________________ '80 924 n/a SOLD |
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J1NX3D

Joined: 06 Feb 2003 Posts: 1333 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 11:00 am Post subject: |
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take the long way home
love my nine two four turbo
back road warrior
how'd i do?  _________________ '86 944 |
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skemcin

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 1284 Location: Plainfield, IL
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 12:59 am Post subject: |
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Winter, Spring, Summer
my nine-two-four-gtc
Baby needs diapers _________________ 924.org (no time to complete)
9249206346 - 89k – new shifter bushings, belts, running well.
9249206347 - 8k – waiting its resurrection, no power at the fuel pump and fuse #7 blows w/power |
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My924gtc
Joined: 14 Aug 2004 Posts: 1362 Location: 248
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 8:15 am Post subject: |
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seasons change not I
throwing aside burnt red leaves
twisty nine-three-three |
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timstar92404

Joined: 22 Sep 2004 Posts: 2075 Location: richmond BC
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 7:20 pm Post subject: |
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My 9-2-4
Why are you a piece of crap?
inhaling toxic fumes sucks
why won't you answer me?
haha sorry I don't think thats even correct its 5, 7,7,5. _________________ 78 924 sold.
85.5 944 |
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skemcin

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 1284 Location: Plainfield, IL
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 12:00 am Post subject: |
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| timstar92404 wrote: | My 9-2-4
Why are you a piece of crap?
inhaling toxic fumes sucks
why won't you answer me?
haha sorry I don't think thats even correct its 5, 7,7,5. | uh, yeah just a little off.
a.) four lines instead of three
b.) everything directly relates
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c.) the correct math for your "poem" is actually 4,7,7,6.
timstar nine two four
mechanics math listening
george w bush
now ^^^^^ is a Haiku! _________________ 924.org (no time to complete)
9249206346 - 89k – new shifter bushings, belts, running well.
9249206347 - 8k – waiting its resurrection, no power at the fuel pump and fuse #7 blows w/power
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timstar92404

Joined: 22 Sep 2004 Posts: 2075 Location: richmond BC
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:51 am Post subject: |
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hey I remember from grade school that there is another type of haiku that is longer than 3 lines. _________________ 78 924 sold.
85.5 944 |
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skemcin

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Posts: 1284 Location: Plainfield, IL
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 1:24 pm Post subject: |
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| timstar92404 wrote: | | hey I remember from grade school that there is another type of haiku that is longer than 3 lines. | lol - yeah that "other" type of Haiku you speak of . . . is the WRONG TYPE OF HAIKU.
lmfao.
oh shit, I need to stop - the beer is talking lowder than me!!!
 _________________ 924.org (no time to complete)
9249206346 - 89k – new shifter bushings, belts, running well.
9249206347 - 8k – waiting its resurrection, no power at the fuel pump and fuse #7 blows w/power |
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Khal

Joined: 26 Sep 2003 Posts: 4872 Location: Sunny and lovely interior BC, Canada
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:17 pm Post subject: |
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She's silver and fast;
Bred for sinuous tarmac;
Apexes flash by.
Great thread, by the way.  _________________ '80 924 Turbo |
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Physcho
Joined: 30 Aug 2005 Posts: 27 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:55 pm Post subject: |
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in light of my recent anger at vandals i give you
"my windscreen is smashed
might sell the car, not worth it
least has air con now"
oh i tell a lie, i'd never sell it... but to fit that much into so few syllables, too hard. _________________ People who think they know everything really annoy those of us who do. |
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rdudejr
Joined: 30 May 2005 Posts: 63 Location: Atlanta, GA
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 3:26 am Post subject: |
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God! What is that noise?
E-Brake on, L-M-A-O...
Crap, now it is broke
I wish that wasn't a true story :*( _________________ There are 10 people in the world, those who understand binary and those who dont.
Linux - Development
Mac - Productivity
Windows - Solitaire |
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andyfranqueira
Joined: 06 Aug 2005 Posts: 61
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 3:46 am Post subject: |
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